Beautiful poem. so hard to be in contests with you because you always do so good! I entered this one too if you can't tell, but not sure if it compares to yours. Good job though...always a challenge!
Charisma*

This speaks right to me....very sad and poignant piece. Beautifully written....flawless.

I really loved this poem as well. but i sort of feel now that you use the abcb rhyme scheme alot. and i want to see what else you can do! lol. but this really is a great poem. the emotions displayed are done so very well and the flow was aslo great.

xx3Lauren