Our exchange

by David johnson   Jan 3, 2007


I gave you my heart
i gave you my soul
you broke me apart
a reason to console

i loved you alot
but you just left me to rot
i thought you were the one
you put the shine in my sun
i thought you would always be my baby
damn wasn't i crazy

i thought i would pick you up for a prom
thats before you crushed my heart in your palm
i thought you cared
i thought you loved me
but all you did was put everything else above me

why dint you care
it is so unfair
you should have told me you didn't share
the same feelings for me as i have
you
I thought were an angel sent to me from above
how wrong was i when you wont even give me a hug

now there's nothing left
of what we had
how could you make me fell so bad

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Your lines seem forced, and the structure is off. your emotion is coming out of the whole poem, so well done for that. ibe

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Wow this is nice. sounds like you already found a poem to give to ur gurlfriend cause this is really beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. I'm speechless!

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