Lost feeling

by Anonymous Angel   Jan 3, 2007


I have lost
the feeling
that we call love..

I did like you,
and even loved you,
but something has changed,

My feelings changed,
it happened when you,
decided you liked someone
better than me,

Is she more beautiful than me?
Can she kiss you better than me?
Is she doing everything better than I did?
Why?

Why did you do it?
did you thing I wouldn't find out?
Well, you're wrong...
I saw you two walking on the street,

Together,
and hands entwined.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I liked this. It was like a poem/love affair/story lol. In this line,

    "did you thing I wouldn't find out?"

    thing should be think I believe. Other than that it seemed really heartfelt and there was great flow. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    "I did like you," < I liked you.
    "but something has changed,

    My feelings changed,"
    ^ Changed is used twice, kinda messes up the flow.
    "you thing I" < think.
    "you're wrong..." < I think ' you were' would sound better.

    The poem would have probably been better as one or two stanzas, instead of how it is. It kinda messes up the flow. The flow wasn't to great. But the emotion was okay, along with the with actual poem.
    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Excellent thanks for your comment on "My soul mate

  • 18 years ago

    by brianna

    Great poem, really beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Great job! I loved it!
    xoxo

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