by Bryan
Well its pretty good, only a few things you can change like capitalize the beginning of your sentences, and on the 11th line make it "Is she more beautiful than me?", on the 12th line make it "Can she kiss ypu better than me?" but other than the capitalization mistakes this is a good poem, 5/5!!! |
Great job! I loved it! |
by brianna
Great poem, really beautiful |
Excellent thanks for your comment on "My soul mate |
by Teria
"I did like you," < I liked you. |
by Cella Bella
I liked this. It was like a poem/love affair/story lol. In this line, |