Wow, very good, i like keep it up,check out some of my poems and tell me what you think
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~ShOrTiE~

Great job.. short and simple.. but still really lets the reader know what your feeling inside..

I really liked this poem. your rhyming scheme flowed very well with the words, and i had a tune in my head while i was reading it. wonderful! 5/5

This poem is incredible.. keep up the good work :)

This is a very good poem. I like the way you have captured the feeling of moving on with your life.
Driving away from all that I know
Knowing that as a person I'll finally grow. This sums it up greatly!

This is well written, the rhyme flows smoothly. The repition of 'Driving away..' adds continuity and rhythmn, not to mention the emotional emphasis. I like how you start with despair but end with hope and acceptance. Excellent piece in every way!

Peace, Poetry & Power,

GaryJ