Me

by Racheal   Jan 3, 2007


What is wrong with me?
I can't do anything right
No matter how hard I try
it turns into a fight

I'm always pleasing others
I tend to forget about me
But no matter what I do
acceptance is an absentee

Trying to find myself
inside this world of hate
Is a life of sadness and
upset my eternal fate?

confusion controls me
thoughts overwhelm me
hates consumes me
fear will end me

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Great job 5/5...this is better than the other one I had read. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, that was very good.
    There was some pure emotion in these words, and it flowed well.
    i especially liked the ending.
    keep it up
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by rene

    That is really good. you write what i feel and write, just in diffrent words...and its great

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