How do you feel

by Racheal   Jan 3, 2007


Why can't i get you off my mind
no matter what, its you i seem to find
i can't escape my thoughts of you
and wondering if our love is true

do you think of me the same way?
is your mind consumed everyday?
do you love me as i cherish you?
is your love for me true?

how do you feel?
how can i tell?
i can't read your thoughts
i can't feel what's real

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Wow that was great. I really liked even though it was short 5/5. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You tried too hard to rhyme, and used rhymes over. It does nothing to the flow, only spoils what could be a lovely poem.
    just let the words flow from your heart, concentrate on thoughts and feelings rather than getting the lines to rhyme.
    but i did enjoy reading this one.
    good try,
    keep writing
    xxxx

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