I realy like the basic stucture and content of this poem, and I have spent a lot of time pondering its depth. My fear is that some may not understand the tense shifts. but I really believe it deserves a 5

I thought it was sad, but real deep. I liked it! Well, there were a few typos I saw, such as:
"You show me nothing
Is better than *out* (our) love
And I trust"

and

"*Taken* (Taking) my heart away".

Well, I thought I should point those out. Overall this is a good poem! I love the emotions it has.
5/5

There are a lot of grammatical errors in this poem which need correcting. you keep changing your tense within in the poem from past to present. probably better if you choose one or the other.

also, you have a lot of forced rhymes. if the words don't come naturally, don't edit them. it's more than likely that your poem sounds better none rhyming and the idea still prominant, than a rhyming poem with lost intention.

i'm not the biggest fan of this poem, however, it's obvious that it's come from the heart. it's obviously relatable and i think it would be a lot better if you just editted those few problems. well done x

This is really a sad poem. Someone must have hurt you really bad. The emotion comes through. Take Care Cindy

Heartfelt write. I believe the last line should read dreams instead of dream. Other than that, nice job!

This is beautifully written. i loved how you said "What's left of me is broken" it was my favorite line. wonderfully written 5/5