Broken

by Kristy   Jan 3, 2007


When everything around me was breaking apart
You opened up a door for me,
You let me look inside
You let me see the answers to all his lies.

I was looking for the answers
To where my life would lead
Then you walked into my life
Standing by the door
You stopped and looked right at me never letting go!

I was broken when you met me,
But with you I feel alive,
There was something about you,
That I saw in your eyes.

I want to be able to tell you all the things I feel inside.
Every time I look at you
I tell you how I feel,
But for some reason the words don't come out.
Silence is all you hear.

I turn around and look away
Not knowing where to go,
Trying to hide the way I feel,
Trying to let this go!

I don't know why I cover my eyes,
Running from a world I can't deny.
Hoping these feelings will go away
Because I can't fall for you in any way.

Everything will change from that moment on.
Becoming something I can't explain.
Something so wonderful
Something so great.

So why is it I can't let you in?
Why I can't explain?!?

I was broken when you met me.
But you brought me alive.
Now I sit here wondering if you're the guy.
There's something about you that I can't let go,
A feeling growing inside me
Not wanting to let you know.

Im still broken inside
Ill always be this way.
I am who I am
Will you love me anyways?

Im broken inside
But you make me feel alive
Maybe one day youll tell me you love me
And everything will be alright!

Until then I cant explain all the feelings deep inside
All the words I want to say but only silence comes your way.

Please give me suggestions on how to end this or if it's okay. Thank you!

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  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is so wonderfully written dear, just one thing: -
    always have trust in what u write as u r writing right from ur heart...so the talent comes within...dont let anyone tell u how to end or start or anything in between...just write what u feel is good. The emotions u hold for this poem...no one else ever could so they would not be able to justify.

    just my opinion & YES...i really liked ur poem

    all the best and take care