by Tainted Beauty Jan 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
A picture tells a thousand words, |
Very nicely written, your word choice was good. You are a very talented writter, keep up the wonderful work. |
by Mitch
I love it.. A good concept and an amazing flow. Maybe one from a guys point of view later on? I'd love to see what you can come up with.. amazing. 5/5 |
by Robie Lincer
That was soo good! loved the way you used your words... and the way you described the whole poem! |
by Yulie
WOW. Deep, very well written 5/5 |
Oh wow.. i am speechless.. i have tears in my eyes.. this is soo good it scares me im not even kidding... i've never read a poem so perfect.. i mean there is not one part that doenst rhyme or flow or read beautifully.. its just wow.. I LOVE THIS POEM! |