Wow! thats so good!

You have my vote. amazing. i'm speechless. PERFECT

Beautiful.. positively beautiful

Amazing. Great sense of imagery and emotions great job.

lots of love
hayley

ps. please check out some of mi jpoems

It litterally brings tears to my eyes.

This poem was completely well written. the rhyming scheme was beautiful and your syllables went together well. just amazing! 5/5

I really liked your vocabulary usage in this poem. The story was good, the emotians stood out clearly, and were real. The poem had great rhyming and rhythem. An excellent read. Keep up the great work and thanks for the comment! xx

This was really intense and creative! good job

Oh wow.. i am speechless.. i have tears in my eyes.. this is soo good it scares me im not even kidding... i've never read a poem so perfect.. i mean there is not one part that doenst rhyme or flow or read beautifully.. its just wow.. I LOVE THIS POEM!

WOW. Deep, very well written 5/5
xoxo
Yulie

That was soo good! loved the way you used your words... and the way you described the whole poem!

Thanks for the comment on my poem! and i would change the word "there" to "their" thanks :D

keep it up!

I love it.. A good concept and an amazing flow. Maybe one from a guys point of view later on? I'd love to see what you can come up with.. amazing. 5/5

Mitch

Very nicely written, your word choice was good. You are a very talented writter, keep up the wonderful work.

Peace, Joe