'at my weakest'
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its good i like the idea ur going with you jus need to work or ur flow and transitions more. maybe try outlining it and centering it up.. it tends to make things flow better.. everyone has their own style some are better than others and the things that make a great poem is meaning depth and flow. look around on here and play around with other's outlines eventually it'll jus pop into ur head and BOOM awesome poem! lol. good luck

Well thats different a gay man is the new hugh heffner teehee. at least he wont have to take viagra to do the bunnies he'll jus do his boyfriends.. and you of course since you ARE his new wife and all. sorry we didn't work out.. Im already getting married ..to a GUY :P

He's guna find out holly.. he's guna figure it all out and im guna die.. im serioulsy guna die.. I can't let him find out.. i just can't.....

We...........broke up