by Mommy And Me Jan 3, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Cover The Lies |
by Bridgette
Wow.. I really love the reality within your poems. Like how you are very descriptive when you right like "Cherry Red number 502" It gives the poem a nice effect. I think my favorite part of the whole poem would have to be the ending. It was a very good way to end this poem. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up! |
by *Charisma*
Very well done, you may have side covering the lies, a bit too much, but other than that. I liked it. |
Wow.. you have talent for taking such simple things and making them into a poem.. i love it.. this is the best poem ive read by you so far and i especially love this line |
by aDORKable x3
Great poem! I had to read it because you said that it was inspired by my two! thanks for all the great comments!! =] |