Bravo for nurses!!!! I like this one a lot....sure my co-workers will too! You do a great job capturing the profession in your verses!!!

Rachel,
I was blessed to have you in my life not only my niece but my caregiver. You are a angel. Thank you! Aunt Cindy

NICE WRITE COUSIN. GOOD FLOW.

This one was good, i'll admit i had to read it through twice to get the real feel for it but thats just because of the structure.
It was excellently done
5/5
*Gem*

Hey this is a great peice of work the part i love has got to be ...

Tragedy makes us all feel bad.
So we try to cure with pills,
They pray insurance will pay their bills.

just splended keep up the good work .

Wow, this was beautiful, and so sad. This poem really showed your emotion, and it made the reader relate to the topic easier, great work.

--Steph

Very sweet poem about what you do. I didn't know debbylyn and you were related. That's cool cuz she's on my favs! She, like you, is very good. Thanks for the suggestions on my poem, I did make the changes, and it sounds much better. Sometimes I throw one too many little words in. Thanks again!
Charisma*

Rather than just comment on the flawless flow I want to relate my feelings on the content on this poem. I hope that I am never ignorant of heroes of the hospitals that are often unsung. This poem reflects that patients are not only physical beings, but emotional and spiritual beings also. The caregiver that is most likely to spend the most time with the whole patient is the nurse. The patient that has a nurse that is aware of their vocation is truly blessed

Very touching! I loved the emotions in this poem, and the words you chose were perfect! Very, very nice! I also loved the flow. Great job!
5/5

This poem is really nicely done, I loved the way its structured and the flow was spectacular. My mom does the sort of work you do and they just aren't appreciated enough sometimes. Excellent poem though 5/5

This speaks so many truths...the entire thing is really good....you had beautiful imagery here. I literally picture every line of this, and it ended up with almost a movie going through my head. very powerful indeed.

keep it up

Wow, verry powerful poem, really strong point your putting out through this write!
Your rhyming is brilliant, but the the flow in line 7 and 8 is ait off, but other than that its great.
5/5
Steph

Wow, i loved it, really a nice job, 5/5!

Wonderfully done.it really makes me think how hard your job muct be.thanks so much for what you do by the way.the poem tells very nicely of the pain in hospitals.great job.5/5
--lexie

Healing hands, knowledge is power.
We comfort others in their darkest hour.
Our kind words dry their tears,
Our competence calms their fears.

^that kinda reminds me of angels! its a very good poem! you a doctor?

Narc xxx

I am a Registered Nuse, although we do most of the doctors work LOL!

Well done, this poem was really good, showed that your proffesion is your life, keep writing, you have talent
xxxxx

This poem was so well written, so pleasurable to read, the rhyming was phenominal(sp?), didn't seem forced at all, you used big words which is always a plus. I think this is the first poem i've ever read that doesn't have anything wrong/bad about it!
wow.
nice one.
5.5

Angel of Mercy.....thats who you are...
a shinning shooting star....your love carries very far.... to every corner of time & space... love is all and full of grace....like all if us, one day will see your face.. Angel of Mercy... Thankyou!!

Dedicated to nurses and Debby
Can't rate Angels....unrateable!!!

Well-done and effective and, of course, accurate......