Sorry it took me so long to r/v/c yours; I didn't come on the site for a while.

This is a great poem. The rhyming words are creative--no "do" and "to" for you. Also it seemed to flow well. 5/5.

Loved it especially the last stanza ur excellent
*kaila*

COMMENT #5

nice.. my moms a nurse too :D.. anyways lol the poem is once again.. SUPERB..the word choice is amazing.. the only thing is that the rhythem changes in the flow in the last two lines of the first stanza..

It takes a special person to be a nurse, you should be really proud

much love and many kisses,
bex

This a touching story of the life of a nurse. Wow. You amaze me with the words of your poems written from experience. You have such a knack for these type of poems, I am sure you have been told that. I love them. Wonderful Job.
Dixie