The Girl

by Beautiful Catastrophe   Jan 3, 2007


See that girl coming near,
As pretty as a rose.
She stops and strikes a pose.

All the people gather round,
Her friends and her foes.
Her insecurities are the one thing that she never shows.

I stand all alone,
Off to the side.
I let my imagination go for a ride.

Visions swirl through my head,
Of what it would be like to be her;
Beautiful, Graceful, Confident and Sure.

My daydream is over,
Reality has snapped back.
It is then I remember,
Those are the qualities that i lack.

See that girl walking away,
As happy as can be.
She is the girl,
That I wish was me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Great pom:) i think ere girl culd relate 2 this one...i like the way u worded it.. keep up the great work.. 5/5

    xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Very clever. i liked your rhyming use, and how the second and third lines rhymed, but then you through in the original a,b,c,b thing. very good. keep up the good work.

    MBHD

  • 17 years ago

    by hani

    Very beautiful poem good work keep it up 5/5
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  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Good poem i liked it... it was cool actually the way you put it. 5/5 keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissi

    Nice, i think we al can undersand what is being said.

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