I remember laying in the grass
staring into the stars
your head rests gentle
as it lays upon my chest
i grow nervous
as i struggle to tell you
how i truly feel
i take a deep breath
and say "i love you"
when you say it too
i breath a sigh of relief
i hold your hand
as you ask
never let go
its been three years now
and are love still grows
its your birthday now
and i place in your hand
a small blue box
as you open it
your face grows brighter
with a smile you look up at me
as i take a knee
your family silent
as they stare in wonder
again i grow nervous
as i wait for the answer
i take a deep breath
and then you answer
as your family cheers
you hug me and ask
"will you hold me forever".
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