I really liked that

Unusual but i liked it. Not a favorite of mine, but it was good. I like how you make the heart seem real and you warn it that so much is going to happen. Neat idea!
Charisma*

This is good. it speaks of your heart being hurt, and you're giving it a warning. i'm sure we've all been there and wish we could've warned it to be careful. it's good!!:)