I liked this, however I felt the flow could have been improved a little. It was, indeed, very powerful.

Nice job.

Oh my. I know exactlyyyyy how you feel. I wanted to write so badly about that exact thing in a poem but i couldnt figure out how. and you just did it perfectly. it's like everythting i wanted to say. you just did it! gret job!

Great work but u gotta work out if its a boy or girl lol besides that keep it up

I do not understand what makes me so drawn to her,
Now I understand his reason for deceit,
She's alluring and enchanting,
And I know why he had to lie to me.

Another great poem by you, again you did a wonderful job in this poem, keep up the great work like always, i will be back to read more of your great poems, 5/5 from me

Powerful, so deep and emotional.
flowed well, and obviously holds so much meaning to you. well done, keep writing
xxxxx

This is really creative good job!! keep it up!

Excellent job! I thought this is very well-written. I found this absolutely flawless. They flow's great! After reading the first stanza, it made me wanna read more!
5/5

Wow.. i love this poem.. not at all what i expected.. nice job.. its got great rhyme and flow!

Definately worth 5/5. it was amazing. brilliant. fantastic. incredible. i dunno, it just meant something to me. it affected me. it was...... ur a greta poet. really. well done.
-Suz xxx

Wow, you have no idea how much I relate to that poem, it's actually quite freaky. I'm the same, this guy means so much to me, yet he shouldn't after what he has done to me, and this is from meeting him online too. Great poem, alot of emotion and you told your story very well. =] 5/5 from me.

Tammie

Well, well.. this one was brilliant. The emotion you show for this person is wonderfully amazing. You create such a heartfelt ''love'' for her in the poem. Nicely done.. 4.5/5