by Rona
Sad, but very deep. I loved the verbal imagery in this poem. The emotions were so strong that I could certainly feel the sadness between each line. Great poem! Hope to read more of yours! =) |
by XxChelseaXx
I really loved this poem. It is very deep, you can really feel the emotions through your words. Great Job. Keep up the good work! |
by Bryan
I think this is a very good poem bridgette, it should be in the lost love section, very emotional poem, great flow for a nonrhyme poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
by Mommy And Me
Deep and powerful poem. great imagery to. i could really feel the emotion that you have portrayed here. good work |
Could use some flow, but other than that it was very well written. The emotion and depth were very good, as was the heart. Nicely done! 4.5/5 |
Wow, it flowed really well. And it was so sad. I can totally relate to this. It was so very powerful and deep. I could feel the emotions pouring out while reading the words. And the vocabulary was great. Keep it up. It was absolutley amazing.. |
That was really sad, but it flowed perfectly. It was very powerful, too. You really expressed well what you were trying to say. |
For a non-rhyming poem this was very well written. The flow and the strucutre were both good. Awesome write. I loved it. |
by Kaylee
That is amazing!!! keep on writing |
by Never URs
This is really creative good job!! keep it up! |