Comments : The Trees (Extended Metaphor)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. May 2007 be a good year for you…peace

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    Im blonde but it sounds good but i dont really know what your talkin about. sorry usually i do its been a long day at school.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Great poem even though it was short. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. I like this a lot. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by a great poet, keep up the great work like always. you are great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    Awww..well written! I love how it all came together! The second stanza was my favourite. Hmm..perhaps you should add more to this. But don't get me wrong, I love the way it is now, but just making a suggestion. Hehe!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I love this one!! So much emotion and heart. Nice imagery and depth. The meaning was as clear as a spring day. Nice work. 4.6/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I liked this poem so much I had to come back and comment again. Bravo .I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite – most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called – The memory of my shadow.