Trust Belies Love (Sedoka)

by debbylyn   Jan 4, 2007


The void my love left
When trust separated hearts,
Filled with memorial tears.

My love bequested
A doubtful heart to linger.
Trust belied love once again.

*The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of
two three-line katauta with the following syllable
counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7.

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  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Nice write. great as always.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I like this type of poem and you did it really well.. excellent form
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Great form mom, loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Although at times Sedoka's are difficult to write, you made this one look easy, excellent job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very nice. First half was my fav. Always enjoy your work, rhyming or not!
    Charisma*

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