Ok show off! Beautiful like always!
Love You!

Very nice. First half was my fav. Always enjoy your work, rhyming or not!
Charisma*

Although at times Sedoka's are difficult to write, you made this one look easy, excellent job 5/5

Great form mom, loved it!

I like this type of poem and you did it really well.. excellent form
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Nice write. great as always.