by Colby Jan 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You see her but you know you can not say |
by Allissa
You truly are an amazing writer colby...Never stop what ur doing...i love it alot....nice work!!! |
by Alessandro
Absolutely brilliant. |
by Chrissi
I'ts Soooo sweet! I LOVE it (then agian i am a girl who loves young romance.) |
Very interesting concept with this poem. I liked the emotion and heart you placed here. Nicely done.. 4.5/5 |
by Kylie
Although the rhyming seems a little forced in a few of the stanzas, the point still came across pretty well. And I'd say it's a fairly good poem, nice work. |