Although the rhyming seems a little forced in a few of the stanzas, the point still came across pretty well. And I'd say it's a fairly good poem, nice work.

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Very interesting concept with this poem. I liked the emotion and heart you placed here. Nicely done.. 4.5/5

I'ts Soooo sweet! I LOVE it (then agian i am a girl who loves young romance.)

Absolutely brilliant.

You truly are an amazing writer colby...Never stop what ur doing...i love it alot....nice work!!!