Wow,.....very well done my dear, a tear almost left my eye reading that , if there was a true lose , i'm sorry , your emotion in the poem is so strong and moving , being a poet is a gift and a curse , use your gift to ease the curse , good luck to you
Nikki Starr

I'm so sorry for your loss. You commented on my poem once upon a time, so I decided to read this poem I take that is about him. Even if it wasn't, it was a powerful poem, and I could feel your loss. Keep up the great work,

--Namida

You've used your words very well to paint such a heart-breaking picture for us.

The last two lines sum it up so perfectly. It seems not quite right to describe the poem about such a horrible event as beautiful, but this poem was.

Keep up the good work.