I love the title of this piece. It has wonderful rhyme and flow and very vivid imagery. Very thought provocing. I think it's a 5 no question!

Very sad, though I feel a bit hard to understand. The last line in the first stanza through me off a little bit, but overall a very nice poem. Good job!
Charisma*

Wow; another wonderful poem.
You have true talent; and i envy you for it. 5/5

C;H.

Winner Winner Winner!
i simply love this poem and i have nothing to say bad about it.!! that is why it won!! i cannot understand why this has a 4.3. WTF? 5! 5! 5! 5! sorry. well it is amazing. i loved the last stanza. it just brought the whole poem together. Wonderful Job. =]

x33Lauren