Future?

by Onimusha^   Jan 4, 2007


Inside this fantasy, it seems so real to me.
The demon locked behind a black gate.
When it breaks, all that lives will die.

There are those who fight back.
Dying too save whatever they can,
this brave, are only the purest of men.

When all is gone, and the best fighters broken,
Hell shall rise, and the Gate shall open.

The Devil shall walk the earth again,
ending the time of all men.

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    Eey man, is goede gedichtje :P ik weet me nl zuigt ff..
    k heb geen zin om echt moeite te doen, maar ga zo door =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tamsin

    This captured the mood you were intending brilliantly it was awesome! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by catherine

    That really is quite dark isn't it. It wasn't bad, but I think it could do with a little more. It's a very concept I just think it could be exicuted a bit better. Maybe longer stanzas with a little more flow? Just a suggestion.

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