My MiNd Is TaLkInG

by aisyned   Jan 4, 2007


CRY CRY CRY,
no one cares,
LOOK LOOK LOOK,
evil glares,

CUT CUT CUT,
go down deep,
THINK THINK THINK,
do you think they care if you weep,

FLOWING FLOWING FLOWING,
do you see the blood,
BLOOD RAIN BLOOD RAIN BLOOD RAIN,
i think its going to flood,

FAKE FAKE FAKE
is that what you want to be,
MIND MIND MIND
I'm your mind so listen to me,

DEPRESSED DEPRESSED DEPRESSED
so that's what's wrong with you,
LIE LIE LIE,
i know it is true

ATTENTION ATTENTION,
I'm want to go to bed,
SLEEP SLEEP SLEEP
I'm all in your head...........

by,Denysia Chapman-madden

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  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Ooh i like it great write

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadGirl AKA Becka

    I really liked the rhythem you had going on in this poem. great job!!!! thanx for the comments!!! DeadGirl

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Thank you.. ok i will

  • 17 years ago

    by Fay

    Wow I liked the rhythm of it, good job, please comment on my poems, I'm sure u can relate, good job.