Heartbroken

by Gasttlee   Jan 4, 2007


I am sore
with nothing more
than a shattered core.

I always ache
as I constantly shake.

I am consistently in torment
as I fall down in descent.

I see no other way,
which is needless to say.

I have no mends,
for there are no ends.

Deep down, I am hurt
with a lot to exert
losing all of my effort.

Will this always have to be?
Can’t I ever be free
to be me
and give others glee?

Is there ever to be a change?
‘Cause It seems long out of range.

I feel enough has been spoken
for as you see my heart is broken.

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  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I have to agree with ^^ that line doesn't quite fit in. it was amazingly written thought, nicely penned. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ahhhhhhhh. This is so so sad. The sadness pours out in the words you write. Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Jemma

    Wow, so well written.

    The one line i think doesn't quite fit in is:
    'as i lie in dormant'. I have to say i don't think that works but excluding that line i think it works well, with an unforced rhyme and a nice flow to it.

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