by Demian Jan 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Ur touch feels like rain drops falling down my face. When u kiss me it seem I'm in a brand new place. A place where theres no hurt or pain. Where love is the only thing u can gain. I wouldn't miss one second of being with you by my side. I just want to share all my feeling and let them all fall like a mud slide. I wanna look into ur eyes as the stars shine down. To make u laugh i would do any thing even act like a clown. Baby with out u i wont be able to live. I have handed every single thing i have to u and i have nothing more to give. |
by Kalee
This a really beautiful poem. |
by Rona
Awww...I thought that was sweet! I found nothing wrong with it. Keep it up! |
by *Charisma*
Pretty ending. Very sweet poem. One suggestion is to organize it into stanzas so that it flows better! |
Oh hunnie...this is beautiful thank you.we've both given eachother the best gift...that is eachother lol i love you |