When a loved one dies

It made me cry because it brought back memories, eh.

You did a great job with this poem. It gives a great description. I could imagine the house, the feelings, and when it said " tears are falling hitting hard" I imagined a huge tear shaking a house.
You're a great poet, and I love your way of writing.

<3 Teria.

This poem is so true, every word, every line, every verse.. perfect
much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow!
This was so very sad...but such a pleasure to read!
I have tears in my eyes from reading this.
The flow was perfect, the imagery astounding and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme.

This is sad...and true...good job!

Sad write. I think it describes the saddness of loosing a loved one quite well.
Again, being honest, there were cliche ideas in this too. It's why I tend not to read sad poetry, because its so easy to step into that hole of cliches.
Good effort though.