Oh Baby.

by BrixGoesxRawr   Jan 4, 2007


Oh baby
It's the way you smile
It just makes me melt
I love this feeling
Something I've never felt

Oh baby
It's the look in your eyes
How they twinkle like a star
You can get lost in them
Even from afar

Oh baby
It's the sound of your voice
So sweet and so kind
It lets me know you're always there
And that you'll never leave me behind

Oh baby
It's the softness of your touch
When you run your fingers over my face
I know I'm right where I belong
Baby, I'm in the right place

Oh baby
It's the way you listen to all my problems
And how you never judge me
That's how I know by my side,
Is where you'll always be

Oh baby
It's the way that you kiss me
The way that you caress my lips
So gently, and so soft
While holding unto my hips

Oh baby
It's everything about you
You're angel from above
You're my entire world
And I'm so deeply in love

Brianna Carter
January 3, 2007.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Layla.

    Freaking 25 bazillion/5 i loved it.
    it had an akward truth to it.
    keep it up. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Aww!! That was adorable. I loved the heart felt moments in this one. Got to be the best I have read. Good work, Brianna. 4.7/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww... this is such a sweet and heartfelt poem. The repetition of "Oh Baby" before each stanza gave the poem a very nice effect and it really felt like you were talking to this person, except in poetic form. lol. Really good job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sweet!
    I loved this, particularly the last line, that really stood out.
    I think you did an excellent job on this, it is one of my favourite poems on the site.

    **For some reason the site kept stealing my text when I tried to leave a comment on Here's to going back.
    I thought that one was well written as well, and a pleasure to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    The beauty of the first love. This is a wonderful poem. I can feel the love you have for your special person. Excellent job!

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