by Cindy
The beauty of the first love. This is a wonderful poem. I can feel the love you have for your special person. Excellent job! |
by Jenni Marie
This was so sweet! |
by Bridgette
Aww... this is such a sweet and heartfelt poem. The repetition of "Oh Baby" before each stanza gave the poem a very nice effect and it really felt like you were talking to this person, except in poetic form. lol. Really good job on this! 5/5 |
Aww!! That was adorable. I loved the heart felt moments in this one. Got to be the best I have read. Good work, Brianna. 4.7/5 |
by Layla.
Freaking 25 bazillion/5 i loved it. |