Wow! I thought that was great! I loved how you described the pain and loneliness in this poem, cos I could certainly feel it. Great job!
5/5

Uhm anyway. i absolutly LOVE this poem. kay :D

I love this poem, its deep emotional and flows well. keep writing

Very emotional peice of poetry. The flow was great as well as the strucutre. I loved this poem. Great job!

Peace, Joe

I like this poem, its good, and i hate it, because, for me in a big way, its true, but you really did a great job!

Narc xxx

I agree that this poem seems a little fragmented being in quatrains, however it's still nicely done. Very emotional, which you conveyed very well.

Wow. i must say, with each poem, i'm liking your writing more and more! you could become famous with the lines that you write dear! 5/5

I like this poem. It shows alot of emotion with a nice flow. My favorite stanza was the fourth one.

Tammie

"I'm dying here
in pools of blood
I'm so unraveled
so undone"

That stanza made me want to cry for some reason, i think i'm going though an emotional stage (it is early morning after all, lol) but seriously, this poem had so much emotion in it that really reached out to the reader. It's excellent
5/5 for sure
*Gem*

(I'll write one about my pet cat soon, lol)

Wow. that is all i can say right now. wow wow wow. that poem had sooo much feeling and meaning in it and i can tell that came straight from the heart. Keep hanging in there girl, and in the meantime keep expressing yourself thru poetry. You have such talent and you need to keep using it. Keep entering lots of contests, and soon pretty much everyone will know that you have some talent. 5/5.. i wish i could have rated higher :) well done!!

Awh this is really sad=[ but amazing writing! it definetly gets a 5 from me.