by e LIZ a beth Jan 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Broken hearts |
by Jenni
I read this one a second time and I still enjoyed it. It epitomizes[spelled wrong probably] how so many teenagers feel in today's society. great job! 5/5 |
by X2892
Wow, that was very sad but it was good, i loved it, 5/5 again |
This one is amazing. i absolutely love it. keep up the good work, your really telling people how much some stuff hurts |
by Jenni
This poem was wonderfully written. the flow was great and i loved how you didn't use too many syllables to make the flow go spendid. keep up the amazing work! 5/5 |
by Allis MT
Hmmm, this is really odd becasue i was just thinking about how people are labeled. I really like this especially the ending. This looks like it took alot of thought, but it turned out beautifullly. You have a gift. |