Comments : Precarious(meaning:insecure)

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! iiloveitt!! its definitly my new favorite this and selfish boy.. but woah .. its just like amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #2:

    I loved the wording in this...once again, so talented! :) I loved this stanza...

    Watery eyes
    As they stare
    Making fun
    Of what you wear

    Really touching. Keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Allis MT

    Hmmm, this is really odd becasue i was just thinking about how people are labeled. I really like this especially the ending. This looks like it took alot of thought, but it turned out beautifullly. You have a gift.

    monkey?

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem was wonderfully written. the flow was great and i loved how you didn't use too many syllables to make the flow go spendid. keep up the amazing work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This one is amazing. i absolutely love it. keep up the good work, your really telling people how much some stuff hurts

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Wow, that was very sad but it was good, i loved it, 5/5 again

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I read this one a second time and I still enjoyed it. It epitomizes[spelled wrong probably] how so many teenagers feel in today's society. great job! 5/5