Your pain can be felt in the words you you write. take Care Cindy

Greta poem it means a lot to me i no these feelings very well!

it happened to me!

5/5 well done

Beautiful poem! I can definitley realte, unfortunatley. You turned painful emotion into a beautiful poem. 5/5

marcella

This is a good poem. I proves what lies can do to people. it was a great read. 5/5

Kalee

I liked this poem alot...it shows alot of emotion and how you feel about lieing in relationships...i liked the ending...it was the strong point in the poem...great job...
Jonda Beth

This experience in life is quite horrid. I believe Honesty is crucial nowadays. Your shedding some light to this issue is quite remarkable. You have my support on that. While speaking of the poem's technical areas, I think it has a tremendous potential to be augmented in structure by applying a consistent line metre.
Nice.