I am alone

by David   Jan 4, 2007


I am walking alone
Without you here
I should have known
As I shed my last tear.

I feel that no one is listening
As my eyes are glistening
Cause the tears are falling
for I have no one to be calling

That you did not love me
And now we are apart
I didnt have the key
To your hidden secret heart

You always said it was me
It was my mistake
That you want to be
Not with a fake,
Not with someone like me

But for you were not true
And you kept blaming me
When really all it ever
Was you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was really sad. I think that you should use some metaphores or something a bit and it would make this poem sound a bit better. But I liked the message behind it. I felt all of the emotion and its a very sad peice. I really liked the ending though because it shows that the person found out that it wasnt their fault. Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really sad poem David. An excellent one as well. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsey

    Aww.
    Sad.
    But great poem!
    And Thanks for the comment.
    Good Luck!

    -Kelsey

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awh this is really sad but amazing writing! keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    "I feel that no one is listening"

    then, what am I doing right now? huh? I thought I was a "someone".

    I know what you mean though. we can be alone even when in the crowds of people. but I'm REALLY listening now, so, that's not fair :(

    Marjan

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