I understand full and well how you feel.

Hope things never get this bad. And dave ur never alone not when u got all ur friends behind u! {and wow}

"I feel that no one is listening"

then, what am I doing right now? huh? I thought I was a "someone".

I know what you mean though. we can be alone even when in the crowds of people. but I'm REALLY listening now, so, that's not fair :(

Marjan

Awh this is really sad but amazing writing! keep up the good work!

Aww.
Sad.
But great poem!
And Thanks for the comment.
Good Luck!

-Kelsey

5/5

This is a really sad poem David. An excellent one as well. 5/5

Kalee

Wow this was really sad. I think that you should use some metaphores or something a bit and it would make this poem sound a bit better. But I liked the message behind it. I felt all of the emotion and its a very sad peice. I really liked the ending though because it shows that the person found out that it wasnt their fault. Nice job.