Good work! I liked this poem!
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5/5

Incredible imagry...these are the lines with the most energy."tie my hands with thorns...i wont feel the pain when i fall asleep"...there are times when some ppl just need peace...the carved words are also good diction..nice...oh and u got a .....thas right a 5...lol

Great poem, dark.
Nice piece of writing.

Hmm...like the vocabs...but I thk u can do better than this...=)

This poem has superb atmosphere and it is very dark and emotional. You created some powerful pictures in my mind, I like the rhythm of it, it is also very touching. Deathly beautiful... I enjoyed reading it, this piece absolutely deserves 5/5

Oh i loved it all i can't even pick a favorite part you rock!!5/5you should check out some of my stuff.

Cory