You need to clean up the funky smybols where your ' should be.

when I first started reading this poem you had me greatly worried hun. Your last stanza was a very welcomed one. I hope you're okay hun, if not you know where to find me

Much Love

This was a very interesting poem at first i did not know wat to think of it but i hope everything is k with u have not talked to u in awhile i still here if u ever need to talk
take care hun
robyn xoxo

Hey, Cody i really miss you, this was a great poem at first i was like ok...where is this poem going (sounded like a strippers club) XD but at the end i realized what it was about and i love this poem. Talk to you soon ( I hope ) XOX Ur lil sis Roxy!!

Ah cody i miss you. i dont write anymore but u gotta add me on myspace or something ok?!
like jenn, i was worried when i first read this.. although i loved the truth to it all. i hope you're ok.
love love love xoxooxox

That's great. I LOVE it (like I always do), and I appreicate all comments cuz I have 4 new poems (lol), but anyway, let's not get off topic! You're a great writer, and ALL your poems take the reader on a trip... IT'S GREAT! I love when you get new poems! Let me know next time!
PV

OMG i REALLY like it alot... great job.. I haven't been on, written, or read anything in like FOREVER I guess I was trying to put this part of my life in the past... it's depressing, but i really like your poems gosh you're soo good at writing!! Hope to hear from you soon!

I like it alot.
it reminds me of songs that my favorite band sings.
tehy are called Rehab.
they write all kinds of songs about things like this.
keep it up i look forward to reading more of your poems.
<3
Sparkxx

I got bored, but it's obvious this poem means a great deal to you. You can easily picture everything happening, but it got repetitive for me after a while. Still, I've read much much worse.

L.x

I do believe that in your subconcious mind you wrote this poem for me!
It suits me rather well, don't you think?
xD
love you <333

Dang this is good,
enjoyed readding it
very unique
like the style
well done