Comments : Pawn of Love

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nice job on the sonnet! I like the carefree feel of this one.....

    I tremble no more as I hold your hand
    A calmness issues forth throughout my soul
    This feeling I wished for but never planned
    Is melting me softly, taking its toll

    Great verse..... wishing, trusting your feelings, being at peace with yourself.
    Well done! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Excellent well done loved it x