Turn My Sky To Blue

by Gem   Jan 4, 2007


One upon a time
My sky was dark
Shrouded in shadow
Empty and stark

There was no light
No room for dreams
It's just depression
As the common theme

But then came a spark
A small ray of hope
It was a lifeline
A magical rope

It lit up the night
Banished the grey
Gave birth to colour
Started a new day

It painted a portrait
With brilliant dye
Displaced the darkness
And lit up the sky

This brand new me
Is all because of you
The day you came along
And turned my sky to blue ©

*Gem*

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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Great rhythem, excellent stuff ur an amazing writer. keep it up gemma.

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Different to what i usually read. very well written but. a touching piece. keep em coming =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a sweet dedication. I like the idea of your feelings painting your world. Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    So sweet darling! Finally writing some poems! lol I loved it sweetie! Great job and I can relate!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I would take out the "to" in the last line to make it flow better, but I really enjoyed this poem. It painted a pretty picture. Good job Gem! I always love your work. There are many poets I think are excellent, maybe even more experienced, but honestly, you are my favorite poet on here. you are so good!
    Loved it!
    Charisma*
    P.S. Old or new poems in my free verse contest is fine!

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