I like the theme of this one.....how love can color your world. What a nice feel good love poem! Nice rhyme and flow too!

Gem, This is one of my favorites done by you. Beautiful in everyway. Excellent job!

Very nice, dear........effectively visual imagery....

I would take out the "to" in the last line to make it flow better, but I really enjoyed this poem. It painted a pretty picture. Good job Gem! I always love your work. There are many poets I think are excellent, maybe even more experienced, but honestly, you are my favorite poet on here. you are so good!
Loved it!
Charisma*
P.S. Old or new poems in my free verse contest is fine!

So sweet darling! Finally writing some poems! lol I loved it sweetie! Great job and I can relate!
xoxo

What a sweet dedication. I like the idea of your feelings painting your world. Nice job!

Different to what i usually read. very well written but. a touching piece. keep em coming =)

Great rhythem, excellent stuff ur an amazing writer. keep it up gemma.

lissa