by aisyned Jan 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Her smile hides her frown, |
by Just Lisa
Well written.. i can relate! I liked this one too! Good job :0)! |
by aisyned
Yea ok myabe i llike the words hide and pain andthats wat i wrote down,thanks for u comment |
Ooh i like it! the first verse is kind of repetitive though...it has the words hide and pain too many times...try not to repeat a word in a verse...but overall its pretty good |
by aisyned
Thank you! |
by deborah
I love it!! |