Bravo you did an excellent job....finally some one to speak kindly about a realtionship

Wow.
That was so cute and adorably sweet.
Right now I can relate to this in some ways. I too deal with explaining myself better in poems than face to face.
Another magnificent poem hun! *Hugs* Keep it up!

Stephanie

Wow great job! i love this poem because it describes exactly how i feel about my boyfriend. i couldnt stop smileing as a read this poem. and i have to agree with what you said at the end about the third stanza not flowing... but its okay because the rest of the poem is amazing!