Nervous Excitement

by *Charisma*   Jan 4, 2007


Cluttered with excitement
My nerves are all at end
Moments away from knowing
If forever's what we'll spend

On the edge of tippy-toes
My smile will not disappear
I am fidgeting constantly
As your answer holds our years

Fingers won't stop typing
Because words will not cease
Shaking all over my body
As suspense does increase

Biting my lips softly
Staring all around this room
My future's wrapped up in words
That will my mind consume

I simply cannot wait longer
Please just say what must be
Oh, minutes become days
As I hope to hear you love me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent, the jittery feeling in this poem really got expressed well, lol
    And yeah, that poem was for the same contest, y'know, three people to a title, i was stumped on what to write, lol. And that one spilled out in about 10 minutes.
    Ah well, lol.
    Brill write as always
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Perfect poem darling! I loved it! Flow and rhyming: Perfecto!
    xoxo