Perfect poem darling! I loved it! Flow and rhyming: Perfecto!
xoxo

Excellent, the jittery feeling in this poem really got expressed well, lol
And yeah, that poem was for the same contest, y'know, three people to a title, i was stumped on what to write, lol. And that one spilled out in about 10 minutes.
Ah well, lol.
Brill write as always
5/5
*Gem*