Nevers

by *Charisma*   Jan 4, 2007


My heart has:

Never cried a tear over a love lost
Never known if something wasn't worth the cost
Never written pain in some diary
Never questioned love and what could be
Never been hurt by words spoken
Never been beaten, battered, or broken
Never been left in the middle of nowhere
Never experienced when someone didn't care
Never felt the pangs of losing your only one
Never been hidden away from rays of the sun
Never been told it's not worth the time
Never been the one to sorrow ever find

But:

All these nevers could be come "one time"
If you don't want this heart of mine

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aweh I loved this, the only thing that bothered me about this piece is the repetition of the "never" I don`t know, it is still very well written, the last two lines really summed it up great.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #2:

    This was just incredible! I mean, so powerful and deep. And it amazingly didn't seem repetitive. You weren't just saying the same thing 100 different ways, and that can be hard to do when you are describing things that all apply to one subject. Anyways, great, great, great (times a million) job! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Great job! I liked this one a lot. Thanks for the great comments! =] Thank you for adding me to yor favs!

    ♥Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Really enjoyed this poem. Great job! Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    Wow, great write. Different style, but I totally understood what you were trying to get at my love.

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